Friday, July 17, 2020

22A- Elevator Pitch No. 3



The feedback I received really led me in the direction of being more concise. My last video a bit too long so I realized I had to condense what I needed to say. I made sure to only include the important details and to save the other smaller details for another time. I think this is my best one yet, because I took everyone’s feedback to heart and used it to be constructively better. The best feedback I got was to do less elaborating and more expanding.

Yes I definitely think by the third time, I was a lot more comfortable in front of the camera, and I also have it completely memorized at this point. I wouldn’t say I memorize the words, but rather the order of the topics I want to bring up. I think I’ve learned a lot about elevator pitches from this, and the feedback has definitely helped me make the small changes I needed to make.

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